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IV. Haiku in the Big City
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(Gar-note: Last month our feature article on haiku and
senryu by Gary Gach lead us to the topic of "Haiku in
the Big City". Many of our subscribers submitted their
own works in that area. Thanks for the response!)
(BTW, the author numbering scheme from previous article is
continued here)
(14) Empty morning streets
Cold path to the castle
Castle colder still
(5) Burnt rubber, cold steel;
Back alley museums for
Big City fossils.
(10) a dog turns over
a trash can to get at scraps -
The city awakes.
(16) behind the dumpster
crushed beercans and used condoms
-- highschool parking lot
(4) Sparrow arguments
in that boxwood bush outdo
even city sounds.
(2) Pedestrians pass
Unconcernedly by the
Hammering alarm.
(18) The IRT roars
Overhead the sun blinks
People cease talking
(4) Dandelions --
golden, silver heads
await the El.
(17) On the slag ridge:
Pink-topped green sprouty things.
Surely not weeds.
(17) Opportunities
in the creases of the roofs
plants spring up.
(3) city street sunflowers
facing
away from the sun
(5) Tribes of marching ants
Follow trails in lost ice cream;
Pearl streams guide them home.
(15) onna no ko young women
ujauja deteru shopping in swarms
haru ga kita spring has come
(17) The roar of the surf
Drown the sound of the tannoy --
Water music.
(17) Losing its point:
The spire fades into
Midday mist.
(1) surrounded by empty hangers
coat check girl alone
this warm spring night
(1) Chuck Easter (salparadis@aol.com)
* surrounded by empty hangers
was originally published in Brussels Sprout
(2) Philip Adams (pka@dmu.ac.uk)
(3) Mykel Board (MQB8130@NYUACF.BITNET)
(4) Charles Trumbull (trumbullc@aol.com)
(5) GMCDONAL@delphi.com
(10) Dean Scott (deans12@aol.com)
(13) Tom Frenkel (frenkel@cucis.cis.columbia.edu)
(14) pierre42@aol.com
(15) IMTG0@cc.uab.es (translation by Nori Matsui)
(Gar-note: I lost the translation to this which Nori
provided for us. This is my recreation, which may
or may not be entirely accurate. sorry.)
(16) Gary Warner (GLWARNER@SAMFORD.BITNET)
(17) Andreas Schoter (asch@cogsci.ed.ac.uk)
(Gar-note: for the non-British, a "tannoy" is a brand
of speakers or public address systems which has been
used to refer to all such equipment)
(18) SELKIRK@NIEHSE.BITNET
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